Sunday, March 16, 2008

Revising Sentences for Parallel Structure

1,The editor told her the writing was interesting, accurate,but not concise.

2. The journalist researched the story, wrote a first draft, and took it to the editor for changes.

3. She was undecided about continuing in her present job, quitting to look for a new job, or being
able to ask her supervisor for some changes.

4. William is not only a gifted painter, but he is also gifted teacher.

5.The child's demeanour, his actions, and whenever he talked amused me.( I have no idea..Y.Y)

6. Employers should look for people who are competent, honest, and cooperate is a quality
they possess.

7. The gambler must either stop going to the casinos or riscking the ruination of her entire family.

8. The young lawyer would rather work seven days a week than spend one day with his
mother-in-law.

9. The kitchen faced a brick wall, wasn't able to get any fresh air, and was painted an ugly
dark colour.

10. I would rather visit the East Coast than go to Alberta this year.

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